I wish, if WE could have,
Some more time together for,
A little more love,
A little more hugs,
A little more to share,
A little more care.
I wish, if I could have,
Made you proud with,
A little more success,
A little more achievements,
A little more name,
A little more fame.
I wish, if WE ALL could have,
Enjoyed with you,
A little more celebrations,
A little more gatherings,
A little more ceremonies,
A little more festivals.
I wanted do so much WITH you,
I wanted to show so much TO you,
I wanted to do so much FOR you,
For this so much to be true,
I just wanted a little more time,
Of you to stay here with me.
My thirst for this little more,
Has made me thirsty forever,
This will continue,
Until I meet your soul,
For my only wish is that,
I WANT TO BE WITH YOU…
…. NOT JUST FOR LITTLE MORE TIME, BUT FOREVER.
Be ensured that your dearest wishes will be granted someday! Remain strong.
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Many thanks dear for your lovely words.
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Hi Akanksha,
First of all, happy February to both Akanksha and Erik!
I too would like to join Erik Vincenti Zakhia in hoping that your wishes will be fulfilled one day, and would like to add to your chorus of “A Little More …” with my musical versus and choruses entitle “Till Eternity…” at https://soundeagle.wordpress.com/2013/02/27/till-eternity/
The contents of my said post resonates well with yours here. You will notice that even both the titles of our posts end in a horizontal ellipsis “…”
Combining the crux of our poetic visions:
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This is such a beautiful piece on the loss of a loved one. 😢 Very well done.
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Thank you Walt, for your comment. My writing skills are a talent I got from my mother. So, whenever my writing is appreciated it means a lot to me. But, I never thought I will have to write such things, it’s painful.
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Hugs my friend 😊
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Beautiful. We always everything a little more😉
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Yes, we always want a little more of all good.. Thanks for liking this.
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Sorry about the error in my comment. A *want wasn’t added.
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Yup I noticed, but it was very well understood, fill in the blanks..
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Ha ha…Thanks…
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Such beautiful words so well articulated Akanksha. Love is so beautiful
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Words are beautiful, but emotions behind these are so painful, I never wanted to go through this phase. Love is beautiful, but separation of loved ones is painful. Thanks a lot for liking this post.
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Thanks dear but who would want to but life takes a turn and life has to go on
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Thanks dear but who would want to but life takes a turn and life has to go on. Love is the most beautiful Akanksha
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Very well articulated dear. These are the same emotions which i have for my mom. Today even after 8 yrs of lining alone without her there is no single day when i dont cry remembering her.
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Yes Didi.. You can understand it well.
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This poem is very informative and articulated Akanasha mam.
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It’s good to know that you liked this post, I will surely check yours too.
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Sure Akanksha mam
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Yes i also miss a family member but i am glad you are writing poetry it is the only thing that has helped me. If you have any suggestions check out mine https://caelidotblog.wordpress.com
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Oh, I am sorry to hear that you too miss family member, it’s a really deep pain. I agree writing helps, it helps me express my emotions and though it does not reduce my pain but it does help me bear this pain.
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Yes i agree. It never cures but it helps.
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Can feel the pain in your words.
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This is sweet, beautifully written💕
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Thank you ☺
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Beautifully expressed
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Thank you.
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This is a very heart touching poem. Loved it. I am following you.
Will you check out my blog? I have just started out.
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Thank you so much for appreciating this poem and also for following me.. You are my 500th follower ☺ ☺
I will surely visit your blog too.. Keep writing.. 📝 ☺
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Beautiful
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Thanks..
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Thank you so much for this award.
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Well deserved and my pleasure Akanksha
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I have no words. How i wish i could give you a hug and share the pain while going through the same…
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I am so sorry to hear that you are going through similar pain, and I know you can very well understand and feel my pain. Thanks for your kind words. Take care.
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Thanks a lot Seema !!
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