I had a conversation, with my God,
I would like to share, what we talked.
HE knew already what I will ask,
This is how HE decided to start.
There is no harm in crying,
I know you are trying.
But, this is your difficult time,
I know you are not fine.
I appreciate your tears,
As they make it clear.
That your love is intense,
For the one, not near.
This loving bond of yours,
Tells ME that you,
Listen to your inner voice,
In spite of the outside noise.
It tells ME that you know,
What emotions you need to show?
Tears are for your defense,
To deal with this difficult phase.
I knew there will be situations,
When you will see no solution.
So, I gave an exit route,
For the storm developing within you.
I know, my child, I gave you pain,
No one on this earth is immortal.
I always made your wishes true,
But, in this one I couldn’t help you.
I can feel what you are going through,
And I am the one who can tell you,
You emotions prove, the purity of your soul,
They show ME your life’s goal.
I also know, it’s the first time,
When you are actually not on MY side.
You feel that your trust and faith,
Is broken and betrayed.
I accept your anger, as it is another emotion,
Behind this anger is a sign of your true devotion.
It is your bonding with ME,
That asks you to be angry on ME.
There are many, who claim to love ME,
But, they do not know, what loving actually is?
Your tears for your mother, show your love for her,
This bonding with your mother, show your love for ME.
I know you are my true devotee, you always love ME,
For those, who cannot love their parents can never love ME.
Parents are the ones, who deserve love and respect,
You may forget ME, but never forget them.
I always admire your beautiful thought,
That parents are your world, your God.
What you do for them is what you do for ME,
If you can please them, only then you can please ME.
I gave you so many emotions to express,
I am glad to see that you do not suppress,
The abilities & feelings I gave you,
As they were always meant to help you.
I crafted you with lot of care, and I would like to share,
I gifted you a soft heart, and it’s an art,
To express the feelings and emotions I gave you,
I feel elated, to have a devotee like you.
So I am with you, today and always,
And even if you find no words to say,
Your feelings will surely communicate,
The reasons from which they originate.
For souls that are, as pure as yours,
I am always with you, or within you.
Never stop listening to your inner voice
It is in fact MY own voice.
This is beautiful Akanksha! Hope your mom is fine. May your heart find peace that your heart is searching. The flow and rhythm in your lines is very touching. 💖
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Hi Meenakshi, thanks for your support and blessings. And thanks for understanding the emotions behind my words and finding them touching.
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Read: “Conversations With God”, by Neale Donald Walsh
“Outlaw Christian”, by Jacqueline A. Bessie.
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I love your writing. Very effective and compelling. I will read you poem a few more times.
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I will surely read these. And many thanks for liking my writing. I am glad to hear that my words were able to convey my thoughts in an effective way and that you would love read this again. Such comments means a lot to me. Thanks again.
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I just read that and found it amazing! keep up this genuine, pure work. and may God always guide your way.
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Thanks for your kind words.
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Beautifully done. I’m sorry for your pain, but grateful to know I’m not the only one. Thank you for the his wonderful piece.
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Yes, you are not alone and you can understand this more than anyone else. Take care.
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I like your devotion
and feel the emotion
But,
God is everywhere
not in a body here
So is your mother
Think,
You love your mother
and feel it here
So is she but
Her voice nowhere
Except in your heart
Which becomes true art
Will you want her to be sad?
So is she…
Don’t cry
for the absence of the body
Feel her presence and be ready
To help others like you
In grief they need you
I lost my father too
I feel his presence within me
So is your mother …
She loves you and
I promise you
She will be within you
Guiding you
With a unheard voice ….
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Thank you for this wonderful response. Your words are kind and soothing. I loved your concluding lines. Her presence means a lot to me. I am sorry for your loss, but it’s comforting to know that you can still feel his presence. I think this is what true bonding is. Take care.
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Thanks for the understanding…
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Beautiful 💓❤️
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Thanks.
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Its beautiful and touching. You have poured your heart out there. Your mom must be so proud of you. Take care.
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Thanks dear. I hope she is reading whatever I am writing, in fact I feel she is the inspiration driving me to write.
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I am sure she is, be inspired and be loved.
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Wow, Wonderfully written! Loved it. ❤
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Thank you , for loving my words and appreciating them.
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So important to let it all out. Sharing this allows others to do the same. Grief is a very natural process and does not need to be hidden. Thanks for your heartfelt post!
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HI Akanksha, a very touching, lovely poem. Parents deserve love and respect, tears are prayers.. great quotes. I’m writing this with tears as I pray for my dad who is very sick. Thanks for those soothing words. May God bless you! And thanks for all the numerous likes and the follow!
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Hope God will see your tears and listen to your prayers. Wish that your father gets well soon. Take care.
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Thank you, Akanksha!
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Thanks a lot for Reblog.
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You are welcome!
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You need to be appreciated for peening down your thoughts this beautifully ❤️
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It’s nice to hear that you liked this. Many thanks for appreciating.
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Beautiful words flowing from the heart. Very touching 💝🙏
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Thanks for feeling the emotions behind these words.
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Heart touching & beautifully expressed. Keep writing dear.
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Thanks for your comments.
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This is so beautiful! May God Grant you His many Blessings ☺💛
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Hi, Thanks for your kind words and support.
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Beautiful 😍
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Thanks.
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A very touching piece. It doesn’t only show your devotion to God, it also symbolises a very strong bond between you and Him and that is priceless. Being able to talk with God requires a very strong faith, love and time for His gospel. I loved the concept of loving our parents, so many things can happen that can come between our relationships with them. I really needed to read this. God will come through for you and your mom. Never stop believing. Love.
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Hi Sharon, your comment clearly shows that you have understood my feelings behind this poem very well. I feel pleased when I am able to convey myself properly through words because writing is a skill I got from my Mom. I loved reading that God will come through for me and my Mom. Thanks for your kind words and support in my tough time. Take care and stay blessed.
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A well presented unique theme for the post.
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Many thanks for your unique comment 🙂
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Pleasure was mine.
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Loved it. :’)
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Thanks… 🙂
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Loved the way you express your emotions, beautifully written 👌
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Thanks a lot ☺
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You really have a way with words. You conveyed your feelings well.
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I am glad to read these words of appreciation. Many thanks ☺
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You’re welcome 😊
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Thank you for sharing this. I needed it and God bless you always.
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I am pleased to know that you could relate with this post and liked reading it. Many thanks for your visit and comment. May God Bless You !!
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Worship the Savior not the devil.
Immortal God “Kabir”
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What a beautiful post wow!
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I am glad to know that you liked it.
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Last quote is super and it’s touching my heart. Lovely.
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Thanks for appreciating.
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Bahut gahrai hai. Is kavita me
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It’s good to know that you understood the depth of emotions behind these words.
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