You ask me to be strong,
Strong against what?
The external circumstances,
The storm that blew my world away.
Or the internal emotions,
The Tsunami that’s showing me no way,
No reason to exist,
And it’s so difficult to resist.
My depression, my grief,
Can’t be concluded in brief.
It may be easy for you to say,
That I should stay in a normal way.
But, to see me cry,
To see me sad,
Is not an easy,
Thing to witness.
You are afraid to face this negativity,
You are unable to cope up with this adversity.
It is not about me,
It’s about you,
I am strong enough,
To be honest with my emotions,
But, you are coward,
You run away from reality,
You want me to portray,
All is right when it is not.
You ask me to stay positive,
In this difficult phase,
In this hard time, when,
I can’t even stay neutral.
But, what about you?
Are you positive yourself?
Do you have enough positivity?
To absorb my negativity.
It is not about me,
It’s about you,
You don’t have energy,
To deal with my negativity.
I am strong,
As I am honest,
To myself,
And to you,
But, what about you?
Are you strong, too?
A very powerful and emotional post indeed. I personally believe that tears are divine messages from the soul whose true magnitude the words are incapable to express. Thank you for sharing such a wonderful post! According to your convenience please do read some of my writings would love to know what you think about them 😊
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Thanks for reading this post and sharing your views. Tears are so much necessary for a grieving person, they are part of our natural defense system.
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Yes they are necessary to express the grief, take your time to heal but at the same time please always remember that you’ll always have my shoulder as a friend to cry on if you ever need it. I’ll be there for you without judging you in anyway ☺️
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Thanks for the support and for understanding the emotions in this post.
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Thank you for sharing such deep emotions. Very courageous. A powerful and touching piece. I wish you peace, joy and love.
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Thanks for your kind words and support.
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Hey wow!! This is an amazing post!! Powerful and emotional.. and asked perfect questions.. lovely work!! The transitions were amazing!!😊😊 Keep it up!😊😊
Crying isn’t a sign of weakness at all!!!💖
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This poem is evolved out of real emotions and it is the original draft (No editing , no modifications). I feel it’s a blessing if I am able to pen down my emotions so well. Thanks for the appreciation.
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Amazing feat!!! It is a blessing!! Keep it up!😊😊
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This is so beautiful and honest. I love the emotions and all the truth behind them. Crying is definitely not weakness. You are so strong. Keep up the amazing writings ❤
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Thanks for understanding the truth behind this blog and behind my emotions.
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Perfect post.. I totally agree that tears are not the sign of weakness… It shows that we are still alive inside… It shows that we still feel for ourselves and for others… It shows that see we are dealing with our problems and not running from it; not trying to suppress our worries; not accumulating it.
I am so happy after reading this poem… Great job👏👏
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You summarised it so well. Thanks. And it’s great to hear that it made you feel happy.
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😊 I think it is everybody’s concern. We feel like crying sometimes, but we don’t because we feel that that might show us weak… You portrayed it very well… Congratulations… ☺
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Thanks again for appreciating..!
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Powerful post Akanksha…moreover an honest one…
While reading lines i felt surge of emotions
well written 🙂
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It was an emotional post and it’s good to know that you got the feel of these emotions in my words. Thanks.
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I so much wish to write one in reply to this poem 🙂
it’s such a wonderful poem
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It will be great to see your post in reply to this poem. I am eagerly waiting…
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Thanks for the encouragement…:)
Surely will keep u posted… hopefully i can do justice to ur poem… 🙂
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Just be free and write what you feel…. Words don’t need justice, they just need feelings..
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So true… 🙂
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You are sending a very deep message. Thank you for sharing this with us!
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Beautiful
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Wow very powerful words, really spoke with me. ❣️
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Thanks.
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I think we need to be softer on ourselves… encouraging ourselves is great. Pushing ourselves to forge us a steel soul is mission impossible. Plus… what for?
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It’s a beautiful post. So brave. I loved the way you’ve woven your rawest emotions into words. Having said that, I feel tears sometimes are enlightening in a way clearing your head, unburdening your soul, which in fact makes your stronger rather than weak as perceived generally
Keep writing. thanks for sharing this post 🙂
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I am glad to know that you liked this and even felt the emotions behind these words. And yes, tears to help in venting out thr pressure that builds inside me and even I believe if I let it out it unburdens my soul, thus strengthening it. Keeping such emotions inside create such a heavy feeling that it ends up in breaking us deep inside. I am trying to continue writing in this tough time. Many thanks for your comment and support.
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I salute you for being honest about your feelings
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I am so grateful for your comment on my honesty. Your words means a lot to me. Thank you so much for giving me such valuable feedback. ☺
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You’re welcome 😊
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